This entry was posted on September 18, 2011 by Ian. It was filed under Traveller 2300 and was tagged with Kennedy, Roosevelt, Star Cruiser, Traveller 2300.
Looking at the original, I would suggest desaturating the planet a bit. At the moment it looks like a dim, orange sun. Also, the ships should be being lit from behind by the super bright white star and then there should also be a lot of orange radiosity light bouncing around from the planet. At the moment neither ship appears to be being lit by either light source but by something else entirely over the viewer’s shoulder – which in turn doesn’t appear to be affecting the planet.
I love the graphic style of your ships, btw. I’m a big fan of your Traveller stuff.
September 18, 2011 at 10:43 pm
Thanks! Yeah, that planet is a little sun like…
September 20, 2011 at 12:28 pm
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